What a great poem, im so glad i read it. the first bit was full of beautiful imagery that i cud picture in my head, then the poem changes. the lines:

And climb into the tree
The rope feels course and painful
But it fits me perfectly

were so clever. very simple yet so effective, well done

This was also gorgeous, it paints a picture in your head and you can see it clearly. 5/5 the only part that i was confused about was:
"Now today is ends." did you mean to say now today ends, or something else? well whatever, it was beautiful
luv gabriella

This was also gorgeous, it paints a picture in your head and you can see it clearly. 5/5 the only part that i was confused about was:
"Now today is ends." did you mean to say now today ends, or something else? well whatever, it was beautiful
luv gabriella

The only thing i advice is to write it as stanzas cos it looks complicated
But other than that i liked the story

Omg. this is so beautiful and heartbreaking. great job.

I love this one...

it reflects everything im going throught right now...

it is beautiful!

worded perfect & flowing perfect...

its all together perfect!

Wow. i loved your poem the flow of words was very good

Good poem though I think that it could be a little better. Keep up the good work:) 4/5