Love the wording; great imagedry.

This poem was excellent. the set out was just !kiss! beautiful.

5/5 David

Wow this is very good! it was really deep and filled with a lot of emotion! i think you did a great job on writing it! 5/5

~Kristina

I enjoyed reading this poem, although I'm not quite sure what it's about.

Either way, it's wonderfully written and has excellent word choice.

5/5

Ohh poor thing I loved this poem the creativity was totally there nice job

Very nice poem i really liked it. keep up the good work 5/5

and thanx 4 comenting on my poem it realy means a lot. and thnx 4 the suggestion. =)

~*~Missunderstood tears~*~