Very sad....the end of love.....very well said in these lines.

Now I face the truth like I have known it all along
There is no turning back for us when love is finally gone.

Nicely done....good flow, rhythm and rhyme. 5/5 All the best, Debbie

Jeannie
Such a sad poem. Really brought tears to my eyes. Great job!

Together is what you told me, our love would stand the pain
Of words left there between us, unspoken, once again.
But you left without a word to me, just packed your things away
And gave me empty promises that you'd return to me one day.

Left with uncertainty is a terrible feeling. Take Care Cindy

'Together is what you told me, our love would stand the pain
Of words left there between us, unspoken, once again.
But you left without a word to me, just packed your things away
And gave me empty promises that you'd return to me one day'

How sad but beautiful poem.

"Together is what you told me, our love would stand the pain
Of words left there between us, unspoken, once again."

Excellently told Jeannie.
I can almost see the heap of words piled between two people, never spoken, yet heavy on the air all the same.
Such a heart-wrenching piece..
5/5
*Gem*