Wow this is really sad. Great job!

So I walk on the dusty road,
And out into the night
I feel like I am going to explode,
Cause im walking out of your sight

I really liked this stanza.
Take Care Cindy

Oh my Gosh!!! David! This is terribly sad! Your amazing! You will never be alone...trust me...your just to amazing for that!! 5/5
love always

Simply amazing. There were so many emotions that you portrayed in this poem, wonderful job! wow! can't wait to read more from you.
5/5

A very sad poem and a mixture of texts
This was an overall well achieved poem.
4.5
-EM

This is so sad, but so sweet.... it was so beautiful. 5/5 forevor!
gabriella

Well, the 1st stanza doesn't really fit with the rest of the poem. But it was a really good poem none-the-less. Such deep terrible sadness... so heart wrenching, because everyone has at one point or another, felt the same way.. lost and hopeless, because the one they love doesn't feel the same. The flow and word choice were superb as always 5/5 as usual my friend
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.