Comments : Just One Day

  • 17 years ago

    by shaun kelly

    WOW i think this poem is great.
    Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by XSugarSexSuicideX

    We can go to the park and hold hands
    or go to the beach and walk in the sand.
    We can swing on the swings or slide on the slides
    or sit on a bench and look in each others eyes.

    if only we could! i miss him so much, and i long for the day i could do this ^ again!

    nice poem. ~SSS~

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "All I need is just one day with you
    then it will be like my dreams come true."

    Excellent opening
    I liked this one a lot too.
    It's very cute
    5/5
    *Gem*