That is so awesome! my boyfriend and i are both in the national guard n we plan to startt a family sooon so shit like him not being home when i give birth to our children killls me! but we knew the consiquences so yeah! but awosome poem

What an inspirational poem! The ending had me teary-eyed. Great job. It's always a releif when out troops can come home. Great job and thanks for the comment.

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The poem is obviously of 5/5 Its very well written with a wonderful story and a superb flow. I think this is probably a correction.....was him saing that he love her... just check once again. great work

I can totally relate my step-dads a us airforce soilder and its hard to say good bye to him