Comments : Colour of Life

  • 17 years ago

    by Jochsey

    Wow that was amazing dave. I love it that is one of my favorite poems of your.

    Keep at the really good work you are really talented.

  • 17 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    I really like this poem, well done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    A great poem.
    How you divised it with the colours..very good. A pleasure to read it.
    Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    I love this so much. The concept of it is great. The main thing that stood out for me in this poem was the flow, every stanza flowed so well. The rhyming was natural and it's all just so true. A nice ending too. You know i'm a big fan of your poetry, always will be.
    5/5

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Your poems are so beautiful
    they make the reader happy, it has perfect flow, and its just wonderful
    5/5 forevor
    luv gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I really enjoyed this! As I was reading through it I was thinking, "I wonder if he would use orange." hehe. Great poem, I loved your outlook on each color.

  • 17 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    DUDE! you rock at writing!!!! u could totally be a professional!! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awwww that was cool! I loved the creativity with the colors and how they symbolized different things! It was very original and unique! you did a great job! 5/5 love always your pal Kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow... that was awesome!! The flow was just brilliant, the idea behind it is awesome, how you put such a complex thought into something so simple... simply amazing!! Great write, defintely an even better read!! 5/5
    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    I love this poem so much. A very creative write. I like how you used the colours to describe those elements of life. A very brilliant write here. Never stop writing!! 5/5

    ` Liz

    - P.S. thanks much for your comments. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    What a way to put a new meaning to simple colors. A nice stray from the color of trees, grass, and skys.

    --Sher

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, beautiful poem. I like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Very Creative. Haha i wish i could pick my colors.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brookie

    It was nice but i must say it was a little bleak

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Wow! your poems are absolutely amazing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow how gracefully you have described the functions of different colours. Very unique piece with creative imagination.

    5/5 Of course

    With love
    Fsams