Friendly-Enemy

by PygmyPuff   Mar 14, 2007


Nothing is like it was
Everything is so different
It's time that separates us,
And flies away like the wind.
It takes just a day to change the history.
One day a friend, is now an enemy

The remembrance of childhood;
The remembrance of innosence.
It unites us in our past,
Forgotten secrets lost.
But time pulls us apart.
The change of heart

Nothing is like it was
Everything is so different
It's time that separates us
And flies away like the wind
It takes just a day to change the history
One day a friend, is now an enemy

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  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Just totally loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by azii

    I really liked this one. I think this is my favorite.. The meaning and whole thing is perfect. You did a awesome job :)
    It's true.. Everything can happen so fastly and everything is different in a snap.. I really understand what you mean.. All I can say is this is my favorite poem of all those I ever read :) I hope I could give it 10/5 lol...

    Best of wishes
    Take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    I really liked it. I like how you wrote about change and how something as simple as time can drastically create or destroy something; like a friend turned enemy.

    I liked the lines,
    "It unites us in our past,
    Forgotten secrets lost.
    But time pulls us apart.
    The change of heart"

    I think those lines really got to the true subject of the poem and portrayed it nicely.

    you did though have a couple spelling errors though such as, "innosence" in line 8.

    Overally I liked it and thought you did a good job.

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