Very good work....
uve managed to keep a nice flow throughout the whole poem...
and i particularly enjoyed the ending...

Ooh, thats really good.
I like it.

Thanks for the comment.

O.G.

Stellar poem
5-5
wonderful use of words, and emotion.

This poem is amazing. i love it.

the flow was great & constant!

i liked the whole poem!

This is beautiful. its sot a good mood to it. thanks for commenting me ^-^

This is such a romanting poem. true lovefeelings. i love your poem take care

Yeh i got what u want to say. gr8 work. i loved your poem.

5/5 and I'm still loving it.

Amazing poem. it's touching and i enjoyed reading it. it's strong. keep it up! =]