Aww. I'm gunna need to read this again to soak it all in. But from the first time reading it, I'm moved by it. It's so cute, but sad. <3 5/5.

Ok. I must make another comment because it deserves anotherone. The rhymthm and rhyme were beautiful. The story it held was beautiful as well. This time I fully understand it. At leaset I think I do. It makes me feel so bad for the dad. Loosing someone you love, it's no fun at all.

BEAUTIFUL--I love your work.

This was a wonderful read. Dark and sad, but lovely all the same. I love how you told the story, it wasn't too simple or bluntly written as are some story-line poems, and you didn't screw up the rhyme scheme by trying to make it fit. I thought the last stanza tied it all together nicely, and my favorite lines were,
"his face buried in his hands,
he has no hope, but yet he stands."

In the middle I thought it was a bit weak, but the last stanza picked it up a bit. Great job

Long sentences but overall a very well written poem, very sad.

5/5 david

Wow so sad...very discriptive though it had wonderful emotion you definitly need to keep this up girl!

This is so sad... =/ it's very well written though and emotion just flows through it, well done! xxxxx

I really liked this. Something about it just made me think, "Wow!" I could vividly picture everything in my mind. It was a bit like a horror film, except closer to the heart, maybe?

Anyhow, nice job. Very interesting to read.

Awww.. So sad but so cute too :')
Wonderful job! :) 5/5
Very good flow
I enjoyed it a lot!

Take care!

Ooh I love a bit of action in a poem. Not sure I follow exactly-a father is killing a little girl to avenge the death of his little girl? Maybe im wrong. But it is powerful stuff either way.

Xxx

Awhh this is so sad:[ but you are a really good writer! i gave this poem a 5

Amazing! its not too clear of what happens to the killers little girl tho. i assume she was murdered? a few typos but an overall very nice poem!

Omg! that is sooo sad! i love it!

The fate of his little girl, is far too true,
as the truth echoes in the words she wrote;
"Daddy, I love you"

i love those lines!!! thats are the greatest! i would give this a 10/10 but i can't so 5/5

xoxo kisses

Wow.
It made me want to cry, I was on the edge of it.

It's flawless, once again. Amazing job, darling.

My comments are probably useless, but I can't seem to find anything wrong, eh. I'm being honest, I promise.