Jeannie
This is fantastic! The imaginary is great.

Arms wrap me
Demons carry me to sanctuary
Silence is my conqueror
And darkness calls to claim my tired eyes
Now lost forever

I love your ending.
Take Care Cindy

A scream tears
Inside the darkness of the night
Twisting me

these lines made me sad you all poem was sad. and deep felings gr8 wrk take care and 5/5

I feel the silence
In the corner of my mind
It creeps.
Teasing me with hunger pains
As darkness falls
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I love a great beginning stanza and this one is mind blowing!

I feel the silence
In the corner of my mind
^^^
I can't help but re-read it over and over again.

Arms wrap me
Demons carry me to sanctuary
Silence is my conqueror
And darkness calls to claim my tired eyes
Now lost forever.
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Ohhh the ending just shoots a little shiver up my spine.

Such a unique write Jeannie, one like I've never seen from you before.
And a very impressive dark poem you've woven dear Auntie .... and the title .... wow definitely caught my attention.

I am completely speechless! My jaw literally dropped in the descriptions you used. Holy freakin' crap! That was just ... wow! Did I mention I was speechless?! Again, completly amazing. And I think one of my fav lines was, "I slip onto the floor, leaning my tired bones against the wall." That can say so much...to me it meant that they became no one, it was only their bones to feel the pain, for their mind had shut down to it. I just invisioned a skeleton on the floor and against the wall. Amazing visual!
It's truly amazing to watch the diversity in your talents. I just commented on your poem so sweet and calming, and then this one so dark and powerful. Beautifully written, Friend. Wonderful job!
~Midnight Sun

Wow! Very nice poem, the descriptions were incredible! I really liked this dark poem.

It is absolute amazing

Love it 5/5

Wow, you're a REALLY REALLY talented poet. I love your style of poetry, its so original and emotional. I have to admit, and i'm not just saying this to sound nice, that you're poetry is even better than some famous peoples'. You're like one of my favourites on this site, keep up the GREAT writing. I enjoy reading your poems!!

Awesome poem....I new that I would like it after I saw that title. I found it so creative and well thought out. You added an excellent amout of vocabulary to it which added to the qualities I liked. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Wow. amazing. that made me feel as if i were feeling your pain... like i just want to scream..honestly..thats great.

Amazing, such powerful and intense description.Very overwhelming and deep.

I was really touched by your poem, the way you describe things made it look so real and your writing style is great. xxx

Although i found your writing interesting, it appears to me that either you have never been on the inside of a padded 'cell' NOT 'room'. if indead you have then your time was not only limited,but obviously rather tame. try dealing with the reality of the pain and anguish that situations such as these cause and stop looking for some kind of redemption. Jade

I love it!

I love this poem.

Oh my god. if you believe in god
this poem showss the depth and the dark side of our merciless world. i love this poem

Amazing imagery - the entire room came to life. My favorite stanza was:

I slip onto the floor
Leaning tired bones against the wall
Ever waiting
For the voice of demons to take control
And give me strength.

knowing whats coming but unable to stop it...almost welcoming it...I felt it...wow 5/5