I gave it a four because the message you were trying to get across came across it's just some spelling errors mixed in with a few i's left uncapitaled ( you spelled treat without the r). But if all of it was capitalized and spelled right it would be fine. Now my question is were you just typing an unrhyming poem or were you trying to get it to rhyme in there because I saw some areas that were rhyming but then a lot of them weren't. I do that too with some of my poems but most people like them anyways. Well good luck off to the next poem to read!