Wonderful poem. The flow was excellent and the rhyming was good.

Beautifully written 5/5

:Sarah:

Wow, that was a great job. Brilliantly written and it seemed to passionate. I really enjoyed reading this.

Jeannie
The sadness in this piece is over whelming. Excellent job!

Surrendering the loss of time
Tore from the soul and from the mind

These words just really hit me.
Take Care your friend Cindy

This was for a contest right.. the one where you have the alphabet running down?
I was going to enter, but you're gonna be tough competition! lol
Seriously though.. such a brilliantly penned piece.
You've outdone yourself
5/5
*Gem*

Very nice!! good piece of wrk. 5/5

What an amazing abc poem. WOWOWOWOWWOW! WOW! LOL that was really good. What else can I say???
Charisma*

Excellent poem! ... keep up the good work

Amazing Jeannie ... absolutely amazing !

I picked up on the alphabet part once I got to
"E" ... I'm a little slow as you know ... lol
I have made many attempts at an alphabet poem but never finished one. A very hard form I think, yet you penned it wonderfully...

Within the vessel lies the pain
Xenophobic to a lover's reign
^^^^
Amazing Auntie!

I just had to comment this one before retiring to bed ...
Take care and have a wonderful day!

I bet you did this for one of the contests that are being held.
It was amazing. :/
Definatly great competion, here.
I'm sure you'll win. :]]

5/5

This poem is truly amazing, you are extremely talented. One of the best poems i've read. Truly excellent, keep up the fantastic work.
Jade x

This poem is truly amazing, you are extremely talented. One of the best poems i've read. Truly excellent, keep up the fantastic work.
Jade x

Really good, i love it, nice work.

Beautiful! love it. im gonna say as so many here allready said, keep up your wonderful work! truly amazing!

0mg! this was a beautiful and well written poem! But BiG vocabulary! lol well nice poem it deserves a 5/5...that may have been the journey my heart took too...
BEAUTiFUL!
JUSTiNA

Good use of a metaphor. Thought provoking and beautifully penned. Your flow and word choice are superb!

Love love it i just joinded and your poem was the first read i found it very good looking forword to more of your work (:

Brilliant written, great choice of words. 5/5.
Keep up this great way of writing.

Brilliant written, great choice of words. 5/5.
Keep up this great way of writing.

Very excellent!! Your creativiting in writting this poem was very well written. I noticed everysentence started with the letter of the alphabet and kept going. I loved that form and how you were able to make it work. Keep Writting!!!
-Fallingawayfromu

I know what your feeling here.. youre really good at this.. keep it up.. comment me
x0x0
amanda