Kim ... A shot of goosebumps ran through me as I read this poem ...
Why ? Because many people would be selfish and chose to live those moments over a million times ... but it is your ending line that grasps the true beauty of this piece ...
"No
For it is the value of Time that lets us truly live."

Wonderfully penned with a truth pounding message that leaves me feeling "alive" for
"For it is the value of Time that lets us truly live."
Ahhh I just love that line!

Take care, my friend
Luanne

This poem was so good. it was well penned yet also had a strong important message running throughout it. it was really inspirational, well done

Wow, this is absoloutely beautiful work, so many layers of meanings.. I appreciate you writing it, is is good stuff.. thank you also for commenting on my poem.. the very last line of the poem is itself, so moving and it is what truly captures the whole piece.... congrats 5/5