Comments : I plead to you

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Wow, i could literally feel your desperation throughout this poem!!! amazing words, they were simple but the way you manipulated them was the trick.

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow, this is so strong and sad, that's almost how i feel, thx for the comments on my poems, they really help, 5/5
    gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    I know the pleading song way to well myself. I love how you leave this open for interpatation (sp?) on who your pleading to.

    At first I thought that you were pleading to God, but as I continued to read it also appears that you could be begging someone else not to kill you. I always like poems that make you think and that have an open meaning.

    You are very talented. I hope that you keep it up.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    I really liked this. Lots of emotion put into it. It did kinda leave me wondering who you're pleading to...or the person in the poem...but idk...its kinda weird. lol. anyways...i liked it. keep writing! 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Lovely job! Has plenty of feeling in it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Wow....that was really amazing.. 5/5 i loved it!

    luv always--- tara

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow...where did you come up with this...it was absolutly amazing and sad...well done..this is definitly one of my favorites...

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a great poem David. Another one your wonderful poems. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow... simply amazing David, as always.. I LOVE the flow in this poem as the guy begs for forgiveness... wow... wonderful job as always!! 5/5
    Much love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very emotional with just a few simple lines. Leaves a lot open to interpretation...which is what a poem should do....All the best, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Unique and thought provoking. Nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    David
    A very sad write. excellent job portraying your feelings..Rhyme and flow were great.

    I plead to you
    Please I don't want to die
    Don t hang me now
    Please, grasp, I did not lie...

    Very emotiomnal and heart wrenching.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    A sad and emotional piece.
    Nice expressions.

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Amazing poem...

    *isabel*

  • Well i plead that you write more poems and its nice to add your kids in 1 very well done

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    Much better than your other poem, i liked this one a lot, im pretty sure this was about hanging a person, i wrote a really great poem once about it for my english class but i dont know what happened to it which sucks, but very good you're a great writer, keep it up 5/5