Wow made nessa cry, but very well written, and i hope you are doing ok with all of this and being away, i love you a ton,
nessa

Really me too...I'm so sorry about her
And the expressions were so appearing and makes you sad just like a sad poem should
She is at heaven watching you as i'm sure
Take care
Your lil sister

Wow this was really sad, buy you did a very good job writing it I could feel the emotions you put in it. Beautifully written. 5/5

Wow this really was an amazingly emotional poem. it is so sad and so honest and blazing full of feelings. i hope ur ok xx

This poem is great. it has so much emotion.
good work.
tc

Wow! i love this!!! its really good!