Comments : You Don't Know Me

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    How many hide behind a mask. Excellent write. Makes you stop and wonder.

    You think that you can see behind
    The smile that hides the pain
    To look into the eyes that hold
    The depth of heartache's reign.

    This stanza really touced me.
    Take care your friend Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    How many hide behind a mask. Excellent write. Makes you stop and wonder.

    You think that you can see behind
    The smile that hides the pain
    To look into the eyes that hold
    The depth of heartache's reign.

    This stanza really touced me.
    Take care your friend Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    But you don't know the words you say
    Can split my heart in two
    And words that cut the soul of me
    Are words that come from you.
    ^^^
    Jeannie this stanza is purely heartwrenching ...

    So I must hold you at arm's length
    Not letting you know me
    It will be my little secret
    Wrapped up in your fantasy.
    ^^^
    A stanza many will relate to I'm sure ...
    Touching- touching- touching read

    Take care Jeannie
    Luanne

  • 17 years ago

    by kiara

    This was very touching i suppose weve all hid behind a mask at one point luvd it

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Here again you have done it. This is such a heartbreaking write about the inner person that no-one really sees. Grin and Bear it.

    To see the face you think you know
    That it reflects the truth
    But do you ever wonder if
    It hides the truth from you.

    This stanza really hit home. I suppose we can all relate in some sense, but this was an amazing summary of the message. As always you have done an excellent job.
    Dixie

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    I'm sure many can relate to this poem. I feel like I'm living that now, trying to maintain a facade.
    Excellent.