Comments : Just Tell Me That You Want This

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is a truely unique poem. I have never read one like it. It's so opposite to what is usually said about friendships and relationships, I love that. Originality can be hard to come across these days, but this is it. Very good flow, the rhyming so natural, and the repitition at the beginning of the first and second stanza's is very effective. I love this. Well done. 5/5

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by Lindsey

    I really liked this poem 5/5 im going through a tough time with my best friend, who will soon be my x bff.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Yes, I think I've found a piece of writing im quite found of. This is different to what I've read, I think because you are showing a different side to what people normally write about when it comes to relationships. Which is good. Flow, jsut great. I don't think theres anything there that I'm not really liking, haha, well done love.
    kaitlynx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Definitely unique and it flowed really well.
    WEll written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    I think the kids I work with call you a "playa"lol The flow and the rhyming were excellent. It is good to hear a different take on life and love!

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    I agree that it flows quite nicely. Has a lot of meaning to it. I enjoyed the read. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow..this is so diferent to other poems i've read. quite harsh lol but i like it. reminds me of my one 'didn't even look back'. i guess the emotions mix of both thats why. i could relate to this one so much :'(
    great work keep it up x

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Greatly written!!...lovely peice of work!....unique and beautifully penned!!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Oh my gosh! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this! I can relate very much, is extremely well written :]

  • 16 years ago

    by stasia

    Dat was super awesum 4real wow i love dat i have to read dis 2 my x thanks boo ur da bez keep up da poem writing ur talented