Really loved this poem x

When I told you I found another love
It was in the stars above

I totally did NOT get those two lines . Some of the rhymes sounded like they were forced, and the flow was kind of rocky . But it wasn`t that bad .
..__MiNDYY

Omg sad poem you have written! it brought tears to my eyes.

you should fix:
"Still i was not there to hand your hand"
i think you meant "hold" not hand.

but yeah wonderful poem about loving someone and hiding it. great job! 5/5

~Kristina

Hey
this poen made me go cold all goose bumps....

i so liked this bit because i know exactly what u meant... all our furtures are in the stars and we cant see them.. sort of thing.....
"When I told you I found another love
It was in the stars above!

really liked it hun..
5/5
xhx

Omg this is soo sad...you know its liek a moral to tell ppl you love them before they leave. ive always had trouble tellign ppl how i feel and al this kinda makes me realize not to coz one day they wont be here anymore 5/5 great job!