I love this poem and your write it has alot of emotion and it is really great keep poems coming please i enjoy reading these.

Ooooooomygah this is an amazing poem. its so calming and sweet! love it love it love it!!!!!

Wow..

Omg...your poems are great I Lvoe them...you really have talent!

Beutiful =)

Beautiful piece! I'm loving this one too!!!! I mean a little more than the last one I read!!!!

You have such a gentle way of expressing yourself...it's sounds so sweet and sincere!!! I love this...great write!!! What a lucky chick she is!!!

10/5, if it was freakin possible!

I don't know what it is about this one, but it's definietely my favorite out of your group of poems as well. It might just be the wording, or the structure, but it really hits me. It captures you, makes you read it again and again inside your head, because, it's not that you don't get it, it's that it makes you think... and think and think and remember.

=D Excellent job!

This poem was so beautifully written, it sure must have been a breath-taking moment for you two, and you describe it so sweetly...
The rhyming and the wording you used also fitted wonderfully.

'..of everywhere in the world, here is where I want to be..'
^^This line really caught my eye, dont know..I loved it!

Great work on this!
5/5 :)
Take care,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS xx

I love this soo much

This is AWESOME!
i think this is my fave poem of yours!
:)

<3
XxAshleyxX

Another great poem written by you, *5

Very nice :)

This is amazing and really descriptive! I like it alot:)