Comments : In Real Life/In Real My Dreams

  • 10 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    I forgot to add that this is my first poem I was able to actually sit down and write... ever!! I wrote this for someone I care deeply about who I can not be with right now....

    Natalie H.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jeff

    Natalie,
    I sincerely loved this poem.The connection you make between real life and dream life is fantastic.Great piece of art.Keep writing.

  • 10 years ago

    by just me

    I really like this, vey nice, especially the way it ended.
    <3
    L.C

  • 10 years ago

    by amaze me xo

    Diz poem iz rea||y cute :] i like it

  • 10 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Wow, I am just about to run out of your poetry. How depressing. Hope you write more. I hope you don't waste your poetry by quitting writing.

  • 10 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Oh my! you've almost made me cry. okay, one minute i was laughing my head off at ch ching now im almost in tears. im an emotional wreck when i rading your stuff hunny. This one is definatly a five outa five. i love it.

    x

  • 10 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Wonderful poem. I really liked it. I can relate to it lots. Feelings were expressed in a very nice way. You did a great job on this. 5/5 keep up the great work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessica

    This is a rele nice poem, i liked how it was repeating in real life, in my dreams,, greta poem!! excellent
    Janaynay

  • 10 years ago

    by Viola

    I really like this one too..and it's very true as well..keep up the good work! =] -all the best

  • 10 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    That was wonderful! =D Very good for your first one as well =) Keep up the wonderful work and a perfect 5 ^_^
    Rhea

  • 10 years ago

    by Phil

    Wonderful poem 5/5