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by Lesbian Natalie
I forgot to add that this is my first poem I was able to actually sit down and write... ever!! I wrote this for someone I care deeply about who I can not be with right now....
I sincerely loved this poem.The connection you make between real life and dream life is fantastic.Great piece of art.Keep writing.
by just me
I really like this, vey nice, especially the way it ended.
by amaze me xo
Diz poem iz rea||y cute :] i like it
Wow, I am just about to run out of your poetry. How depressing. Hope you write more. I hope you don't waste your poetry by quitting writing.
Oh my! you've almost made me cry. okay, one minute i was laughing my head off at ch ching now im almost in tears. im an emotional wreck when i rading your stuff hunny. This one is definatly a five outa five. i love it.
by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX
Wonderful poem. I really liked it. I can relate to it lots. Feelings were expressed in a very nice way. You did a great job on this. 5/5 keep up the great work.
This is a rele nice poem, i liked how it was repeating in real life, in my dreams,, greta poem!! excellent
I really like this one too..and it's very true as well..keep up the good work! =] -all the best
by Beauty In The Breaking
That was wonderful! =D Very good for your first one as well =) Keep up the wonderful work and a perfect 5 ^_^
Wonderful poem 5/5