True. Nobody knows what
other have been through.
So no body knows each others
pain. Keep it up! God Bless
5/5
<3Tayy^__^ily

I'd only give this poem a four out of five, because I felt while the flow was good within the stanzas, it was shaky while going from one to another. You used very nice, raw vocabulary however, so 4/5.

Very deep, i loved it :)

>.<''
Cliche.

Now.
I wouldn't have given this poem a four if you hadn't have f'ed up the rhyme scheme.
You went from a,b,c,b to a,b,a,c to a,b,c,d to a,b,c,b.

Sure. Poetry is about letting yourself write and letting the feelings out. But let's do it with some composer.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

This was a great poem
my faovrite by you in fact

nice job
and when it rhymed it
rhymed really well

great job

5/5