I loved the rythm of this of the words and the way you used noises (shh) to add to the sound of the poem. 5/5.

Wow.
This is a very well written poem.
Although
I got confused at where to pause.
If you're going to space it
It would mean that you're pausing, correct?
It just sounded different to me at how you wrote it.
Maybe it was just me.
Lol.
It was good, though :]

Oh wow. this is a different kind of poem, the way it's written. but i can defiantly relate to every word you wrote. wonderful job! i hope you figure it out! 5/5

~Kristina

This is sweet, it doesn't really feel finished though, but it flows really good, and the penning is really cute. 5/5
gabriella

This is actually a really interesting poem I've come across. It was something I've never read before. Not the fact that it's a love poem. It's just really neat because it sounds like you're debating with yourself with this secret about love. It was just really cool, and I enjoyed it a lot!

Alesia

It's sweet, good job! =]
5/5

This was written well. you seem to be fighting with yourself...trying to figure out what is right and what is wrong...4/5

OK, usually when somene knows or has a feeling for someone and they're confused, this is what they are saying in their mind. That's too funy. Well great write! god Bless 5/5
<3Tay^__^ily

I thought this poem was cute, and great for a poem so short. I liked the first stanza, lots. : D Keep it up, hun. <3

I loved this poem. It was sweet, I love the "shh, don't tell anyone" parts. It was cute. Even though it was short, it grabs the readers attention and they just want to see what we are keeping a secret, it was great. Keep it up .=)
-Ally