Wow .. this is really touching i know sumbody who has breast cancer and i agree it has to be stopped.. good work

Aww thts really sweet i reallyllike it

I think this is a awsome poem i know how you feel my grandma died of breast cancer 2 years ago and i still cant get over the fact that she is gone if you ever want to talk you can send me message maybe you can come check out some of my poems somethime

I think this poem is written from your heart, and I think that your grandma would be very proud of you :-)

Keep up the good work honey
xx

Agreed.. my family and I are very scared right now, because I may possibly have it. So, reading this must be a sign. lol Nice poem, Alex. =)
~Ally~

I can relate to this.. sorry i can't say anything more, but it's to painful at the moment..
5/5
*gem*

Wow that was a great poem and i am sorry for your loss. and this poem touched me a lot becuase my grandma died og cancer too
Keep writeing

This was such a great poem. The emotion put into it was just wonderful. You are a very good writer good work. 5/5..sorry for your loss.

I know what you must feel, great poem about someone you loved dearly, I lost my mom to cancer ,so i can relate, sorry all in all good job
5/5 I feel your pain, God bless you , your friend Tracy

This was so heartbreaking to read...and yet so beautifully written.
I was thrown of by the fact that some parts rhymed and some didn't, but apart from that you did a wonderful job with this, the emotion and depth scream through the words, and that ending is very intense and powerful.

Very moving....I recently lost my grandmother...and though she was 83...she had a youthful and fun spirit that I miss so deeply.....some of the questions posed by your poem...I've wondered myself.

Sorry for your loss.....remember she lives forever in your memories and in your heart!

I had an aunt who died of breast cancer and this kind of reminded me of her. I donate every time I get the chance. This poem was wonderful. *5/5*

Alyson

Vary touching and amizing good work