Comments : You....

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    How very sad. Your emotion comes through in the words you have penned. Writing always helps. Keep writing.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    I agree with Cindy, the emotion in this piece is so heartbreakingly beautiful..
    You've really laid it down perfectly.
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (P.S. whenever someone comments me, i comment back, don't ask cos it gets annoying =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Giegielove Goddess Poet

    So emotional somehow...but nice how you expressed your feelings.5/5. excellent!