OMG Danielle! This is amazing! The imagery I got from this... amazing... I also liked the word choices ((like opulence)) I always like learing new words and your writing is getting better and better with each poem I read. Definately one of my favorites! <33

Love ya wifey!! xox
xxCiaoxx

Good one:) ! impressive

Wow danielle...I loved it...5/5 for sure...

That almost sounds like you are interpreting somone. Maybe I should try some sometime. I'll think about it.

Nice nice. C: Sultry. I love dark seductress type poems. *Bows to your poetry* >> I dunn wanan bow to /her/. XD a 5/5 for ze ex-e-kyu--shun

(I totally forgot, what movie? XD)

I write stories, ya. http://schemilix.deviantart.com

And I'm glad you enjoy my poems. ^^ That poem wa s abit contetxualised; His eyes change colour with his emotions, and he's... Got the spirit of the light god Valdagion in him. Loooooong story. Hound: >> Make her be quiet. Me: -_- XD

Love it :]
amazing wording and
everything was great.
good job <3