Comments : Coming Mothers Day

  • 10 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    nice poem, but you should try not to force it to rhyme, then its much better, but i still give you 5/5, and you're right mothers only want the best for us!
    kisses stephanie

  • 10 years ago

    by isabel

    Really nice...
    ("don't reward her with a spoon" xD that part made me laugh...")
    very truthful also
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    "Or rude, angy and and mostly unkind" (sic) ( = Angry is misspelled.)

    Aw. This is soo cute hehe I hope I can write a Mothers Day poem too for my mom! Anyway, keep it up and you'll eventually shine. :) Love, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Aw, thanks!! :D

  • 10 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Haha. again.. your so cute.. so young.. Great poem!! (pss.. it rhymes better then most mine).. lol Great job! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Thankie-wankie for the goodie-woodie comments! x)

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    I thought this was a lovely tribute to a mother, unfortunately i can't relate as my mother is a cow and a witch
    But it was so pretty, well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Ayumi

    X)) Roflolmao.

  • 10 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Such a sweet poem 5/5 nicely penned keep writing!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Thanks! I might start a new poem. :3

  • 10 years ago

    by Civil Hatori

    I loved this poem! Your ryhming was really good, and I fell in love with it! The line:

    But don't reward her with a spoon!

    made me laugh :D. This one is going to my favorites! *Adding to favorites* Great job, and keep up the great work! 5 out of 5!

    With all due respect,
    Hatori
    The Illusionist
    Moogle Lover

  • 10 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    "If it weren't for their love & care
    The world would be such a nightmare!"

    I agree with that quote, ^^ ok yes I know its a happy poem but I have gots to make a sad comment. See, I haven't seen my mum in like 6 years? I don't know where she lives and she never calls ^^ but it is such a cute wittle poem xD 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Thanks! Maybe you can try to locate her? :3

  • 10 years ago

    by michael

    This is good art, so simple.

  • 10 years ago

    by Anime Lover

    Awww! I really loved your poem!!! Its so cute ^_^

    ***Jackie***

  • 10 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Yay thank you! Really love your username too. :P

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    PleasE writE poemS anD wE wilL reaD..ratE anD commenT.. thiS 1 iS lovelY... 5/5

    thx....

    luzaN

  • 10 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Errr.. thanks for your comment.

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaz

    Nice w.. sweeet poem... yokuy kakimashita nee.. kireiii na.. uta/ poem desu.. keep it up..

  • 10 years ago

    by Ayumi

    [Karan] Hey, thanks! Don't worry - I'll be adding new poems this week.

    [Kaz] Arigato gozaimasu! :D