Hey,
nice poem, but you should try not to force it to rhyme, then its much better, but i still give you 5/5, and you're right mothers only want the best for us!
kisses stephanie

Really nice...
("don't reward her with a spoon" xD that part made me laugh...")
very truthful also
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

"Or rude, angy and and mostly unkind" (sic) ( = Angry is misspelled.)

Aw. This is soo cute hehe I hope I can write a Mothers Day poem too for my mom! Anyway, keep it up and you'll eventually shine. :) Love, Debbie

Aw, thanks!! :D

Haha. again.. your so cute.. so young.. Great poem!! (pss.. it rhymes better then most mine).. lol Great job! 5/5

Thankie-wankie for the goodie-woodie comments! x)

I thought this was a lovely tribute to a mother, unfortunately i can't relate as my mother is a cow and a witch
But it was so pretty, well done
5/5
*Gem*

X)) Roflolmao.

Such a sweet poem 5/5 nicely penned keep writing!

Thanks! I might start a new poem. :3

I loved this poem! Your ryhming was really good, and I fell in love with it! The line:

But don't reward her with a spoon!

made me laugh :D. This one is going to my favorites! *Adding to favorites* Great job, and keep up the great work! 5 out of 5!

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist
Moogle Lover

"If it weren't for their love & care
The world would be such a nightmare!"

I agree with that quote, ^^ ok yes I know its a happy poem but I have gots to make a sad comment. See, I haven't seen my mum in like 6 years? I don't know where she lives and she never calls ^^ but it is such a cute wittle poem xD 5/5

Thanks! Maybe you can try to locate her? :3

This is good art, so simple.

Awww! I really loved your poem!!! Its so cute ^_^

***Jackie***

Yay thank you! Really love your username too. :P

PleasE writE poemS anD wE wilL reaD..ratE anD commenT.. thiS 1 iS lovelY... 5/5

thx....

luzaN

Errr.. thanks for your comment.

Nice w.. sweeet poem... yokuy kakimashita nee.. kireiii na.. uta/ poem desu.. keep it up..

[Karan] Hey, thanks! Don't worry - I'll be adding new poems this week.

[Kaz] Arigato gozaimasu! :D