Although short, when i was reading this i could feel a rhythem, this could be made into a really good song, great work xox lithium

It isn't snobby at all!
It's pride
And when we experience that, it has the right to be shouted from the rooftops!
Excellent piece =)
5/5
*Gem*

Amazing, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Your words are indeed true. The descriptions were concice but very powerful and convincing.

I LUV IT! GREAT POEM! =) GOOD ATTITUDE!

YOU GO GIRL5/5

YOU GO GIRL5/5