Good choice of words! the title was really catchy the flow was smooth! and I can relate in the poem too.. I'm also looking for something.. I'll give this poem a 5/5! well done

Hmm.. very beautiful work...

the first stanza seem so interesting to finish the poem,

then second stanza's more interesting,, i love the way u right ur words it express well,

....for me it was perfect! at the beginning to the end.. u made a nice structure of ur work,, it really clearly and it flowed well.. ur such have a great imagery at young age ur so great! 5/5