Comments : Second By Second

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Just forget all about it bro
    Just don't forget you have all of us
    And take care
    Your lil sis
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Nice write keep at it bby this is a strong write,
    ness

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was great, great description and transition another 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    Wow very good i loved it. 5/5 good job

    Britt

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    Love the poem. Great description and remember you have many people for you.

    -Daniel