Comments : One Last Dance

  • 16 years ago

    by Trish

    This is a good poem. I can so agree with this. I am going through this becuase I have to let go of a guy that I cared about so much. I gave him my whole heart and he let me fall through his fingers. So I have to let him go even though it hurts me to do. This is a good poem though. I will talk to you later. Bye!
    Can't wait to read more of your poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Aaah great job. i loved you work take care 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    One word: wow. Or then there's PERFECT!!!! The rhyme scheme was awesome and it flowed like a dream! lol great job! WONDERFUL poem! lol 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Daniel Goding

    I love this poem good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    That is so beautiful and sad at the same time. You expressed your feelings very well.. Great work! 5/5
    .x

  • 14 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Great poem!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really enjoyed this one. Very emotional and beautifully written. Keep it up.