This is one of the best poems that I have read on this site. It deals with mature topics, stated in a manner that is both horriffying and captivating all at the same time. I've dealt with a lot of death recently too, as I was a relief worker for Hurricane Katrina and worked with the police, so I understand the scent of death that you so perfectly describe. Excellent work, well deserved 5/5.

Amazing one. Imagery is so powerful. Poem is both horriffying and captivating. Vocabulary was great and flow was good. Obviously one of your best write. Keep up the great work!

Again a very poerful read. One thing ive noticed about your poems - there ALWAYS really really powerful. Well the reason i chose to read this poem is becuase of the title. You used aliteration and i immediately notcied this. "Decaying Death" also made me intrested in what the poem is about. You had a good rhyme scheme going on hear. It worked nicely. The first two stanza's togerther create this horrror story image. "sickening sweet sweet smell" this part you used a long alliteration as well as repititon. Togerther these make the reader remember this part of the poem. Quite strong. The discription in this poem are really vivid. Creates a brilliant image. I loved your vocabulary it was once more really powerful. I loved the entire feel of the poem. Really powerful. Excellent usage on alliteration throughout the poem. To improve i suggest you use a more varied punctuation pattern. Keep it up! xx

Wow again I liked this the best so far