It clearly shows that u put a lot of effort in writing this poem. a job well done. great choice of theme, the rhyming of ur words also seem a bit forced but the mood and storyline of the poem cover up the tracks. 5/5

Wow! i love it. amazing. u done very well writting this poem

Wow.
At first glance...
This thing intimidated me.
It was fairly long. Lol.
But anywayz,
This was a great story.
But still.. it IS a story.
Anywayz,
The flow was kind of rocky.
It seemed at times
You didn't know what you were talking about.
As though you added random things
And hoped they worked along the way.
It DID work...
But still, I dunno.
I'll give you a 5/5 on this one.
Just because your story is pretty cool.
Your ending kind of weirded me out.
A ghost?
Hmm...
I was hoping for some realism.

Hey!!..i loved this poem...well i did'nt find any errors which needs to be pointed out...and though the rhyme scheme did seem a li'l forced...the story u've penned through this work is wonderful..5/5!
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Oh...I have tears in my eyes.
This was so heartbreaking to read and yet written so beautifully and elegantly.
The flow was flawless throughout, and the imagery was beautifully used, it created very vivid pictures, and at times creeped me out.
You did a wonderful job with this.

Now that was truly breathtaking. You had my full attention since the first stanza. Just plain wonderful, I loved it, so sad and dreary with a ghostly twist at the end, it was superb. 5/5 for there is nothing higher.

"The look on her face, she looked if she would cry." you forgot the as here other than that, perfect!

A really heartbreaking read...
What am i meant ot say about this poem? It's telling something thats so true in many ways. It happens... yet many people would ratehr not accept the fact it does occur.
Well the title draws the reader in as "Images of a Child" does not seem to fit in the dark part of the website. It seems as thought its a hppy read. Yet its in teh dark section. The first few lines do make the poem seem as though its cheerful about children. Then it enters into soemthing thats so heartbreaking.. and so true at the same time. This is really emotional read. The poem had a god flow. To be honest i could really go more deeper into the poiem for this comment - but the reason im not going to is becuase this has allready sent shivers up my spine. And if i read it more wti hdetail... ihonestly think ill be in tears. A sad yet heartbreaking read. It was good. Really good, and really sad...
xx

And again another beautiful poem from you! I'm guessing you like the theme 'child' in writing poems! XD anyway great poem! I enjoyed it! well done keep writing :)

Very nice, it was ......gorgeous, lol, to many people use beautiful, all together a very nice poem

That was such a beautifully gorgeous poem, even though the topic was so sad! You created such vividness with your words, great flow and structure. You took a decent amount of time writing this and it is absolutely stunning! 5/5 from me!

Excellent poem. you really put effort into your work. It tells such a neat story and the ending has such a twist. Your a very excellent poet. ive added this to my favs. 5/5

Now that was effin chilling, relly sort of haunting, I loved it the whole point that the little girl was a ghost wow