What is this about? Do you think i blame you? He so you are mistaken. I would never blame you. I love you.

It would really be a good song bro..i especially liked those;

Tried to be stronger
Tried to be smarter
Tried to be everything but you...

Take care,
Your lil sis
Laura

Tried to be stronger
Tried to be smarter
Tried to be everything but you...

I like the repitition of the word tried, and I think that last line was a perfect way to end the poem. It really had a sense of finality to it. Good job with the poem.

Wow i can very well relate to this poem very nice 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

I love the emotion shown throughout the poem. And the repetitions just made it better. I don't know what to say. An amazing write. 5/5

` Liz =]

10/10 great job u did good on this one.