Comments : I luv

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara

    Ahh...blah, super cute poem! omg its so hard to say, lol nice simple and a hint of love, very nice job

    ---tara

  • 10 years ago

    by Alissa

    Lol

  • 10 years ago

    by Roxanne

    This is a cool tongue twister...lol you did a good job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Remmi

    Oh that was cool! I think that's the first tongue twister I've read today on this site that has made sence!!! (and I've read a lot!)

    ~remmi~

  • 9 years ago

    by Letty

    This is really adorable. I really liked it and I really needed a laugh right now. This would be a great way to get children of young ages to get interested in poetry. Excellent Job! : )

    Letty

  • 9 years ago

    by Christina

    Lol i didnt get all twisted around until the last line lol!!! good job u got my tongue tide!!! =D

    <3 i love you silly