Excellent poem.It flowed very well although at some points it seemed like you were trying to hard to ryhme but it was still good. 5/5 --Miranda

Wow, all i have to say, is that, one day you will realize that he is not worth it, but i feel ur pain!

Wow thats deep

I liked it. sometimes the best way to forget is to think about what went wrong, and what they did. I like how you wrote about how bad it feels. and the ending ended up being positive. good stuff.

It was deep.. 5/5