Dang lady your poems seem to flow so
effortlessly .... it makes me so darn envious .... lol ... seriously.

- Choose a favorite stanza ... impossible. I love them all.
Remarkable talent sweet lady and an amazing ability to move the reader to tears ....

((big hugs Auntie))
Luanne

An outstanding piece as always!
As Luanne said, the flow was so effortless, almost fluid
The words were so poignant and each line touched the soul.. it really got the mind thinking
5/5
*Gem*

Wow, that was incredible! I loved the darkness of it and the language you used was so intense! Favourited! xxx

Jeannie
This is such a emotional piece. Your writing always draws me in. The imagery and flow excellent. Your talent is amazing.

Heed not the hunger of the heart
For night has come to see
Inside the thoughts that cloud the mind
Of broken memories.

These lines really touched my heart.
Take care
Love Cindy

Excellent poem, very well written. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace