This is a pretty good poem, love the imagery, and it flows pretty good, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Wow that was great description transiton and etc 5/5 Go Hearts with a talent

Thats a low blow. A good write got talent though

I liked this, it began really good. It wasn't really the end I was expecting but, the poem itself was a great write. Lots of emotion and something that I'm sure is hard to go through. Keep writing. 5/5

` Liz =]