Wow!..beautiful lovely wonderful poem..filled wih love...perfect cute descriptions....perfectly flowed...wonderful write!
Good job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

For some unknown reasons, and in a most pleasant way, reading this adorable piece amuses me. Perhaps this amusement of mine was triggered by the line which states of how "the night transforms itself in a charming prince[...]" whereby our own "[maybe] yearning-for-love" subject finds a strange, "...heavenly glee."...And I love the twist towards the end! Very nice work. :D Furthermore, I really like the Shakespearean allusion you used in your title as well as the overall progression of the poem. =] On the whole, it wasn't lousy nor tedious at all. Thanks for sharing! Love, Debbie

Beautiful poem.....Sounded like a music to my ears....Nice imagination and description....Great job!!! take care and keep smiling always and keep writing...

Writer's block - Something I hate, yet, can relate to. Nice to have you back. =P

This poem was simply magnificent. It was so beautifully written. The imagery was vivid & unique. The flow was flawless, the emotions were strong, && your vocabulary was amazing. Overall, a superb write. Keep writing! :]] 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Chavii
I love this piece you have written. Imagery is wonderful :)

The rhythmical breeze becomes his love sonnets,
inviting me to dance with heavenly glee.
Lost in my sweet dream i dance and dance
holding hands of my invisible imaginary prince

I love these lines. Even though it is sad that the dream ends. It is beautiful.
Take care
Your friend
Cindy

Mid Summer Night...the concept itself is so thrilling...so captivating. Brilliant idea and then the way you presented it...awesome...if this what BLOCK could do then i wonder what will happen with the free flow??

Lovely poem dear...sorry for the late comment.

keep writing

all the best and take care

and hey congratulations for coming on boards.. :o)

I like it, its better than mine 5/5

SAVE DARFURby Barbara

Imagine being attacked
and losing all you have
Imagine crying all day
and no one is there on yourside
Imagine having no food
and no clean water to drink
Imagine being a slave
for someone who takes over yourlife
Imagine going to bed
knowing you might not wake up
Save darfur
because our brothers and sisters
are dieing everyday

This is a great attempt, if at all to call it an attempt, it was a lovely piece of poetry, you have long been undiscovered by myself and many other poets, you are really talented, and i really enjoyed this poem great work! xox lithium

If this is a result of writing block and lousy attempt then keep writing chavii! Wonderful poem... Great imagination... Well done... Impressed!

Do u know what i liked most..about this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..