Comments : Hold my teddy bear tight

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    *hugs you tight* I'm sorry that you ever had to go through this but it's clear by talking to you that it's only made you stronger and wiser and able to help others thats pasts haunt them ^_^ Your really a wonderful person and even if I didn't know you I'd be able to tell that just by reading your poems =)
    Another great poem that shows that although theres a lot of pain and horrible things and people in the world you CAN come through it a better person =)
    Great job once again,
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    Wonderful piece.. I love reading this poem...
    It flowed very well.. The best poem I read today.
    Strong and powerful emotion inside.
    I like the ending too...
    5/5 is less than enough. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    Wow.....that was sad.
    I truly hope that hadnt happend to you
    I liked the way that the words gripped my attention and held my interest throughout the whole poem!
    -shattered

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, tis was amazing poem, very well written with alot of deep emotions in it. you have done a great job..... beside the great word choice and style, i really love the rhyming, it gave a great read into the poem, keep it up dear.

    a 5/5 from me as you reall deserve it.

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Dang!! i dont have words to explain how i feel about this... but i do rate this a 5 also.. are a wonderful writer

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    You are a powerful writer with words that speak to your soul with great emotions behind it. You can really put your feelings in wonderful word choice.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Very powerful piece! I really hope that didn't happen to you...thats so sad! Beautifully written peom with deep emotions...really like it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    Very sad poem. I think the reference to the teddy bear really made me realize that the character is still like a child on the inside, wanting to hold on to the past and change it, kind of way. Great job. 5/5