A very well written poem, with good flow, vocab and imagery. This is very good and you carried of the form very well
xxxxxx

I do love a good etheree =)

"With willful bribes polished
By tongues of sweet, sly
Deceit, as vim
And vigor"

As always Debbie, your flow is impeccable and your language is in a time beyond your years =)
Excellent form
5/5
*Gem*

I do love a good etheree =)

"With willful bribes polished
By tongues of sweet, sly
Deceit, as vim
And vigor"

As always Debbie, your flow is impeccable and your language is in a time beyond your years =)
Excellent form
5/5
*Gem*

Great poem, I like then way you've written it the awesome choice of words is what makes this so good.
Phil

Though I am unused to reading in "form", I wish to compliment yours. An "Etheree", hmm. Personally, I haven't the patience to discipline my structure; although I can respect those who take the time to express their talent, thus.

The poem itself was like an excited rant of emotional steam. It reminded me of an observational someone, but without the endurance for 'full content'.

I enjoy being inspired to rave about poetry and meanings, thank you for the oppertunity.

I like this one, but again, I'm not sure what it's about! Maybe I just have dificulty understanding things.. I like it, though. I like the words you used, and I definitely love the form. Etherees always sound so special. Maybe that's where the name came from.. Ethereal. =D

Once again, very well done. Keep up the awesome work
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Beautiful poems yet unique style writing..."You will forget all this. You can remember any time you wish."

All the best for you, take care. Bert.

Wow....ultimate piece indeed...combination of great words with an ultimate way of presenting it...this is really superb...loved it all the way

all the best and take care

Excellently written. I'm always impressed with your vocab.
Well done, you're really talented. 5/5 from me

Hm. Not too bad. I'm not a BIG fan of Ethree's, but this wasn't too bad. I didn't much like the ending, but the rest was brilliantly written.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Cool choice of style in this one..
this would be a really hard one to do i think.. but i think that you nailed it..
its really deep as well, really nice
<3 ang

Wow. i love these types of poetry because the imagery is just perfect. the words you used. just brilliant. 5/5

I wouldn't have enjoyed it like this if I hadn't tried writing an Etheree myself.
I do like this form of poetry very very much :)

Marjan x