Oh wow i really like this poem. its short but so strong and has all the words id like to say to a certain someone...5/5

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Short yet powerful!!

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I really like the rhyming of the poem, good job. I think the title really goes well with the poem, flow was smooth - keep up the good work! ^_^ thanks for the comment you made me smile :)

I really liked this whole poem, from the rhyming to the title... great jobb, and great flow... 5/5 from me, and thank you so much for the commentt

Interesting poem, it is very short but still powerfully written. I don't like rhyming. 5/5

Really good poem.I believe you could have made it longer and even better but still it was short but very good.5/5

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Sad, but good job.

This is something naughty I have ever read....you are actually trying to portray the childish feelings of the woman for her man 5/5