Amazing poem with great flow and word choice as always, the words spoken in this poem couldn't be more true and the impact hits hard for those who'll actually read it. 5/5

Oh my.....This is both effective and affective.....I dearly appreciate that you took on this element of life and plan to show this piece to friends....Poetry is the voice of the Soul...Your poetic images show clearly here what your Soul has seen and has to say..Here is a link to something you may well appreciate.:

http://www.ellenbass.com/pray_for_peace.php

May Peace Prevail........Strive On..

I really liked this poem it expressed alot of thought though out. The images you gave were very well done I gave it a 5 keep up the great work if you have time check my work out

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-Lisa

What a well written piece with a great flow and important content. Well done.