Comments : Once

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Amazing poem with great flow and word choice as always, the words spoken in this poem couldn't be more true and the impact hits hard for those who'll actually read it. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Oh my.....This is both effective and affective.....I dearly appreciate that you took on this element of life and plan to show this piece to friends....Poetry is the voice of the Soul...Your poetic images show clearly here what your Soul has seen and has to say..Here is a link to something you may well appreciate.:

    http://www.ellenbass.com/pray_for_peace.php

    May Peace Prevail........Strive On..

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert

    I really liked this poem it expressed alot of thought though out. The images you gave were very well done I gave it a 5 keep up the great work if you have time check my work out

  • 9 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow..
    amazing work
    please check out my work when u can:)
    takecare
    -Lisa

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a well written piece with a great flow and important content. Well done.