Aww this was a really sweet and loving poem you have written to your dad. i wrote a poem about my dad, but it sucked, yours was wayyyy better. it had a nice flow to it and was really good. 5/5.
i really like your poems. i wonder why i never saw you on this site before -.-
i'm gonna read A LOT more of your poems and add you to my favorites =]
Your passion of love for your Father is felt in this write. I am sure your Father will really enjoy this read as well. Maybe one day our daughter will feel the same about me. May your heart be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.