Comments : Saddened Your Soul [Acrostic]

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Probably the best acrostic i have read in my 15 years of life my 4 favorite lines were:
    Sober smiles and fascinating looks- cute and fun
    Delightful lies began so proud- thats the way lies often betray us
    Dance with me until forever as it's my bid- sweet and sensitive yet a bold statement
    Rewinding all your tears and let moon to be ours- one again a very cute and bold line and yet still some what beautiful

    personally i loved it another piece worth 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    I like this poem however I have read better from you this is only my opinion but I dident feel this poem flowed very well also it would be good if you split this into four 4 line stanzas.

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem.
    Flow; flawless
    Rhyming; excellent
    Writting; Very well done

    I also loved how in the 2nd stanza the lines flowed into the next. Very effective. 5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow quite deep and I REALLY LOVE YOUR POETRY 5/5