Comments : I Am.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Man this is a awesome poem! I loved every line of it! You've some talnet... and it's all pleasure to read something like this!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    I am life
    With no breath
    I am angel
    Of my own death
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    that was the BEST part..I hope u're okay...havent written n a while...this is so not you!!!
    keep that up..& ur poems always make me feel good =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Like the structure and your word choice.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by ruth

    And I am in awe
    Of what i just saw!!

    amazing! I don't even know what else to say

  • 16 years ago

    by Barry

    Beautiful words of a higher nature....

    for in which I am all and yet ...... nothing

  • 16 years ago

    by Mo

    I really liked this - flowed so well, very short and to the point (without being obvious and predictable). I liked it.

    Well written.

    Mo

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    NicE poeM.
    VerY truE.
    EnjoyeD readinG iT.
    TakE carE...

    LUZAn

  • 16 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is really good, I liked how you can get so much emotion into the whole piece even though it is so short and compact. As a suggestion, I'd say have the theme of 'love' work it's way into the piece earlier than the last line, because then the last part would be even more effective and have more of an impact. Still, this is a good write, well done :)
    -ariana

  • 16 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Hey Nitin

    this is a stunning piece of work. I think my favourite of yours!

    yep, it's great to be back on the site again!

    tc
    shobhana