Comments : Roses Are Dead

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. I like how you took something similar and twisted it. Very nicely done. What would've added just more flare, is if you rhymed within each line.

    5/5.

    Great job, I wouldn't have thought you were going through writer's block.

  • 16 years ago

    by Loruhh

    I love how you used the 'Violets are blue and roses are red' thing, I have never thought of it the other way!!! Great Poem!!!!!!!
    5/5
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by CEE CEE

    WOW IS REALLY ALL I CAN SAY IT WAS A VERY SAD POEM AND I WAS THERE IN EVERY LONE AND STANZA AND EVERY MOMENT I WAS THERE FEELING THIS POEM EVERY WORD. I LOVE IT

  • 16 years ago

    by Navy Blue Heart

    Wow, that was fantastic! I'm in love with it! Favourited! xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by NIDAL

    You say you have writers block...i say this poem is simply perfect...when poets write a 2 page poem they tend to lose most readers...you managed beautifuly to convey feelings in few lines....thank you for sharing ...enjoyable read....5/5 please vote and comment on my latest "gifts of sorrow" "arabian sands" "crown of thorns""my tears" thank you

  • 16 years ago

    by Grey Ajurahck

    I love the images and metaphors in this. I also like how it can be interpreted in different ways, meanings. It may be short and seemingly simple but there is an underlaying deepness that really sinks into one's heart and mind. Excellent use of language and flawless rhyme sceme. A very touching and sadly beautiful poem.

    Peace,

    Grey Ajurahck

  • 16 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is magnificent. It is so melancholy and beautiful. I like how it can be interpreted in different ways. Love the unusual wording. You have painted a wonderful picture with your words, a very meaningful and touching poem.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    What do you do with the faded petals
    what do you do with old
    what do you when you lost your
    shine
    what

  • 16 years ago

    by [[Get Ya Wicked On]]

    I really liked this one, it wasl ike I could see the flowers from your words. Magnificent. -T. Jane

  • 16 years ago

    by Bree

    I LOVE IT!! ABSOLUTLY WONDERFUL! KEEP WRITING

  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    For witers block it sure is a good poem. i loved it. and there deffinitly is alot of interpretting in it good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Such sweetness and flow! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Lovely love lovely poem.
    I could totally see what you mean.
    Beautiful job on this one.

    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    It has deep philosophical meaning, a really well penned and meaningful poem.With writers block you writing wonders :)

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    O_O oh wow! It's very deep :| I love your choice of words! Even though you have a writer's block you can still create a masterpiece.. Fantastic work. You're truelly talented.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nebula

    I love this one Gem, it like to can see it happening in slow motion...

  • 16 years ago

    by supratim

    It is really a sweet sad poem.
    So touching... deep...!!!5/5
    I've straight away added it to my favourite
    list!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by anthony

    I cant see them flowers changing but.,... the fact we loose our personalities as we get real old and moldie :P GReat job Gemma
    Peace
    Anthony

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Beautiful poem.
    Very sad.

    " They wither and fall, drifting to the floor
    The beautiful colours are now nevermore
    Floating to the ground in a pile so neat
    The signal the end of a life pure and sweet "

    This stanza was my favourite.
    Beautiful written.
    Love your work.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow great poem 5/5