Comments : Apart

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    God...great poem.soo sweet and just perfect.
    ur great*

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyrstie

    Omg! That poem was amazing! I feel the exact same way about a guy online.

    I'd trade 1000 wishes,
    To have you by my side,
    I'd sail to you on rivers,
    Of the many tears I've cried,
    I'd move mountains just to hold you,
    I'd die one thousand times,
    If loving you is sinful,
    I'm guilty of infinite crimes,

    ^^ very powerful words right there. Keep up the good work. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulKisses

    I love this poem. it is AMAZING! i could totally feel something out of that poem