Debbie
This is awesome....LMAO.....hahaha

Please include a photograph
If you enjoyed this jingle
Must look a little like Brad Pitt
Or thank you, I'll stay single!

Brad Pitt, George Cloney to name a few :D
Great job!
Love Cindy

Haha! Very funny! Had any "replies" yet? lol j/k I like it, its really good.

Lol i thought it was cute and funny

I just love this every tme I read it....

Lol.. Very very good. The sing-songy approach to it makes it so much easier to read, and therefore more hilarious. Very well done. xx

This is so cute. I haven't read a delightful, humorous poem for weeks. So it's a worthwhile read, definitely. :] I wish you good luck with your search! Lol.

Wow what an interesting poem...reflecting the qualities of your ideal man!! :)

The whole poem is poetic and the fun element is also present. Very nice 5/5

Tc
Fsams

"Please include a photograph
If you enjoyed this jingle
Must look a little like Brad Pitt
Or thank you, I'll stay single!"

Lmao! I loved it! Sorry guys, Brad Pitt can take you all on!! hehe
Gorgeous little ditty!
5/5
*Gem*

Lmaooo that was so cute Debbie!

Please include a photograph
If you enjoyed this jingle
Must look a little like Brad Pitt
Or thank you, I'll stay single
^^^^
Loved this part ... whooohooo awesome write sweets

Hahahaha very funny! My only true suggestion was to not use the word tidy twice so close together, and lawn and because didn't really rhyme, but close enough to make it cute...I thought this whole piece had a good flow to it, and was truly funny!
Charisma*