OMG!!! this is the best I have ever read...I really felt it, I felt every word probably because I can relate but other than that, its amazing. The best I have ever seen.

Talent in its purest form!

OMG! can i like show this to my ex? cuz seriously this is exactly how i feel! you are amazing!

This poem is very pure. I love the raw truth in your poems; it's very refreshing.

Your poem does NOT suck. I think what might have bothered you about it would be the simple rhyme you used. I do that quite often myself, and LOVE the idea of the poem, but the wording is wrong. A thesaurus can be your best friend :P

Besides, I believe there is no such as "bad poetry" if it comes from the heart :)

Nice write,

mandy